Your art style is very nice, and I like the little history lesson in panel 2, but I think panel 4 kinda deviates from the whole love and acceptance stuff about pride.
I dont think violent actions have a place in pride, even thoughthe LGBTQ community have faced hatred and violence, I think it would be wise to portray ourselves in a more wise and less "if you don't agree with my sexuality imma punish you" ya know?
Nah, pride started as a protest for equal rights, a literal riot combating against brutality. We protest peacefully, but we can also get our hands dirty when pushed