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David W@dewelsh.bsky.social |
The bit driving me bonkers is the flattening of “younger and more vulnerable years” to “young.” Even if you’re simplifying the sentence as a learning aid, vulnerable is doing a lot of heavy lifting to tell you what’s happening!
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Nina Markl 🏳️⚧️🏳️🌈
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aside from everything else, this opening line is a really bad example for this tool - it’s just not that difficult and it’s very clear what the style is doing here
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